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Date: 2004-09-05 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordweaverlynn.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely!

Minor note: "Champagne" is the correct spelling for the unit -- you have the correct spelling for the city in Illinois.

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Date: 2004-09-05 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silme.livejournal.com
Ditto. Other than that typo, it's great. :)

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Date: 2004-09-06 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aliza250.livejournal.com
" Please stop lying while you people are still taking at least some of what you say seriously."

the "you" should be either "your" or (more probably) omitted.

"and you should be ashamed of yourself for being impugning them without rock solid proof."

delete "being"

The last item, on neo-conservative, confuses me. Context?

But yes, I like it.

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Date: 2004-09-07 08:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holzman.livejournal.com
Thanks for pointing out the typos.

The last item is for the occasional claim that the term "neo-conservative" is used as a code word for "Jewish conservative," with a heavy link to the notion that condemning the policies of the Sharon administration is itself anti-Semitism.

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